Twilight Zone

It’s like water falling over water,

Like liquid when it drowns.

So absurd, I can’t fathom how it sounds.

It’s that god-given thing,

It’s that second nature,

That part between the lines,

The thought caught in the back of your mind.

It’s the strings you can’t untie,

The words you cannot find—

Stuck down the twilight zone,

Where there’s everything you knew,

But there’s nothing that you know.

Where the circles have no end,

Deja vu feels the same again.

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